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Title: Swan Song
Prompt: Fade
Word Count: 117 (14 lines)

A/N: Well, I guess what I did with the prompt here was really anti-fade. But it's an idea I've had for a long time and was going to use in a short story I started back in July, but I can't get it right. So last night it turned into a sonnet. Enjoy.


Of regal head and snow-white wing, a swan
In his life does possess much beauty pure;
Elegance nobler than curved streaks of dawn
Is found in his slender, bowed neck, and more
Passion lies behind his black masked gaze
Than between lovers under moonlight's spell--
Yet the most beautiful part of his days
Is the dying song he sings, his farewell.
We are not now. We are not ready yet.
I will not love and lose, be, then not be.
But I promise you, when my sun has set,
When I'm old, grey, with one breath left in me,
I'll seek you out; wait for me, everlong--
Our love, in death, will be our own swan song.
Current Mood: relaxedrelaxed
Current Music: Jimmy Eat World - Last Christmas (Wham! Cover)
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From:quizam
Date:December 21st, 2006 01:30 pm (UTC)
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i like that. it is so pretty, sad, and in a way uplifting at the same time.
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From:jugglemylimes
Date:December 21st, 2006 09:54 pm (UTC)
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Hahaha. I feel like that's the reaction I get from people about all my pieces. So at least I'm consistent?

Thanks!
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